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The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End
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07-26-2014, 08:44 PM
Can I say I'm (slightly, if not more) jealous? (Never that). But seriously, ditto all the shining critiques of above. A good poem has a fresh use of words, like, "skittering...brack...broody" The rhythm and flow are not obvious, or typical but flow, flow beautifully. There's a lot more to comment on , but I'll post this for starters.
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The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by crow - 03-28-2014, 03:02 PM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by bena - 03-29-2014, 12:53 AM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by David Garland - 04-05-2014, 09:16 AM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by Thoughtjotter - 04-10-2014, 11:15 AM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by crow - 04-13-2014, 06:13 AM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by trueenigma - 07-26-2014, 09:02 AM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by Leanne - 07-26-2014, 10:30 AM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by Willahelm - 07-26-2014, 08:30 PM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by poe - 07-26-2014, 08:44 PM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by billy - 07-26-2014, 11:40 PM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by crow - 07-28-2014, 02:08 PM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by Brownlie - 08-01-2014, 12:42 PM
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