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To Get Over You
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07-25-2014, 06:39 AM
Hi Poe - ditto what bena said about the imagery - at first mention of a needle I was expecting a haystack. I finished the poem unsure about what the needle was for - maybe the title could do some more work here. Repairing the damage, or something? Also, from past tense to present in the final stanza with 'are hunting' - while I'm there, is the 'out' needed?
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To Get Over You - by poe - 07-23-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by bena - 07-25-2014, 06:11 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by poe - 07-25-2014, 06:21 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by just mercedes - 07-25-2014, 06:39 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by poe - 07-25-2014, 06:43 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by Willahelm - 07-27-2014, 10:03 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by QDeathstar - 07-27-2014, 10:45 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by billy - 07-28-2014, 03:32 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by poe - 07-28-2014, 10:24 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by QDeathstar - 07-29-2014, 12:54 PM
RE: Letting Go of Us (To Get Over You) Rewrite 7-29-14 - by poe - 07-29-2014, 11:05 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by jdvanwijk - 07-30-2014, 11:04 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by Pink_Bunny - 08-02-2014, 04:15 AM
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