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To Get Over You
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07-25-2014, 06:11 AM
This is a very interesting piece. It is so hard to write effectively about a love lost, trust me. I thought at first you would slip into the angsty clichés once you mentioned needle and heart, but you surprised me. The only thing you might consider is that there are alot of metaphors and symbols and it may be a bit muddled with the needle and ocean shore imagery but I think overall it does work.
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To Get Over You - by poe - 07-23-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by bena - 07-25-2014, 06:11 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by poe - 07-25-2014, 06:21 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by just mercedes - 07-25-2014, 06:39 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by poe - 07-25-2014, 06:43 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by Willahelm - 07-27-2014, 10:03 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by QDeathstar - 07-27-2014, 10:45 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by billy - 07-28-2014, 03:32 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by poe - 07-28-2014, 10:24 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by QDeathstar - 07-29-2014, 12:54 PM
RE: Letting Go of Us (To Get Over You) Rewrite 7-29-14 - by poe - 07-29-2014, 11:05 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by jdvanwijk - 07-30-2014, 11:04 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by Pink_Bunny - 08-02-2014, 04:15 AM
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