Fear of Falling edit0.1billy, ella

[tectak]

i think i would have got much more from the poem without the flight reference, unlike ella, i saw the dropped hanky as the end of an affair. but obviously the rest o the poem would dictate what it were had i not been tainted by mh17

Yes to you both. Changes are needed. I will, though, without aforethough, edit out the MH17 ref.
Thank you both for bringing me down to earth!
Best,
tectak