07-23-2014, 08:05 PM
"..crescent smiles-at leaping cows, he humors our myths, through cumulus blinking, and the static of space." Nice images and spin on ideas.
"shit fog and shittier smog."-theses lines stink up a beautiful poem. Couldn't you come up with a more creative (poetic) description of fog and smog?
Otherwise, I liked this piece.
Thanks.
"shit fog and shittier smog."-theses lines stink up a beautiful poem. Couldn't you come up with a more creative (poetic) description of fog and smog?
Otherwise, I liked this piece.
Thanks.