07-23-2014, 06:11 PM
heavy as in overloaded, with "her eyes meander" i automatically thought "she's cross eyed" sorry but it is true.
i didn't hate it by any means but it not a poem i'd want to read twice were it in a book. it didn't hold me.
a senryu is more geared toward the human condition than being a captured moment
google is your friend
i didn't hate it by any means but it not a poem i'd want to read twice were it in a book. it didn't hold me.
a senryu is more geared toward the human condition than being a captured moment
google is your friend