07-23-2014, 06:22 AM
I'm reading it right now...although your insistence irks me a bit.
First stanza stands up strong in my mind...very sexy. The only thing I can say is it reads like a cliche love poem, but who am I to judge it?
First stanza stands up strong in my mind...very sexy. The only thing I can say is it reads like a cliche love poem, but who am I to judge it?

