07-20-2014, 09:08 PM
(07-20-2014, 07:35 PM)Qdeathstar Wrote: Yes, i hear you. I was unaware that every post i made had to be a critique...No,no...you shouldn't worry. If you want to POST ANYTHING you can go into Discussion or the Sewer. Crit forums are for crit of the poem. That's all. Your comments are always worthy, which is why I said "and you know it"
My critique of the poem is that it's conclusion is wrong. Words are only a third as important as people claim them to be. If the conclusion of a piece is wrong, why continue?
I know the "wrong" of the poem is just my opinion, but so would any critique I offer.
Best,
tectak