07-20-2014, 07:35 PM 
	
	
	
		Yes, i hear you. I was unaware that every post i made had to be a critique...
My critique of the poem is that it's conclusion is wrong. Words are only a third as important as people claim them to be. If the conclusion of a piece is wrong, why continue?
I know the "wrong" of the poem is just my opinion, but so would any critique I offer.
	
	
	
My critique of the poem is that it's conclusion is wrong. Words are only a third as important as people claim them to be. If the conclusion of a piece is wrong, why continue?
I know the "wrong" of the poem is just my opinion, but so would any critique I offer.

 

