More Haiku Attempts
#1
*Trying for "one breath."

Her light is still on
when he returns home at night
to cold stew longing.

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A penny is tossed
from a frowning man’s left hand
into a fountain.

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A hummingbird halts
in sight of a Rottweiler
leering through fence wire.
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More Haiku Attempts - by ajcohen613 - 07-20-2014, 07:42 AM
RE: More Haiku Attempts - by Magpie - 07-21-2014, 04:17 AM
RE: More Haiku Attempts - by ajcohen613 - 07-21-2014, 04:20 AM



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