07-20-2014, 06:17 AM
A beautiful sentiment. I read with great ease the 1st and 3rd stanzas, but the order of the language in the second has some ambiguity. After reading a few times I see that you are referring to the plots as being, orderly and manicured to fit, but with my first couple of reads I wasn't sure if you were speaking of the plots or the passersby. Probably just me...still I really enjoyed reading it.