< the bones of april >
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(hmm, image on ipad, only image icon thingie on windows/chrome, I have no idea.)

I like how the image confuses me as if it's a reflection but not.

I love how the lines remain separate yet interconnect differently with the one above and below, a good match with the image for me.

And what seals it for me is that bit of honey on my tongue at the end. I'm not done here, thanks.

(and AJ, so nice to have you around.)
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< the bones of april > - by rayheinrich - 07-17-2014, 02:25 PM
RE: < the bones of april > - by billy - 07-17-2014, 03:32 PM
RE: < the bones of april > - by rayheinrich - 07-17-2014, 03:37 PM
RE: < the bones of april > - by billy - 07-17-2014, 03:38 PM
RE: < the bones of april > - by rayheinrich - 07-17-2014, 04:05 PM
RE: < the bones of april > - by billy - 07-17-2014, 06:42 PM
RE: < the bones of april > - by Keith - 07-17-2014, 03:56 PM
RE: < the bones of april > - by cidermaid - 07-17-2014, 04:00 PM
RE: < the bones of april > - by ellajam - 07-17-2014, 09:56 PM
RE: < the bones of april > - by rayheinrich - 07-18-2014, 03:33 AM
RE: < the bones of april > - by newsclippings - 07-18-2014, 07:22 AM
RE: < the bones of april > - by rayheinrich - 07-18-2014, 11:03 AM
RE: < the bones of april > - by newsclippings - 07-18-2014, 11:14 AM
RE: < the bones of april > - by rayheinrich - 07-18-2014, 02:43 PM
RE: < the bones of april > - by billy - 07-18-2014, 04:55 PM
RE: < the bones of april > - by tectak - 07-19-2014, 08:26 AM
RE: < the bones of april > - by rayheinrich - 07-20-2014, 09:25 AM
RE: < the bones of april > - by Achebe - 11-06-2017, 08:36 AM



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