07-17-2014, 06:33 PM
Hi, your poem is interesting in the sense that you wrote it whilst on drugs, although I would say that it will be far more interesting to you than to anyone else as it is disjointed and a bit 'mad'.
However, you do have an interesting way with words and your explanation of how the poem was written is in itself more of a poem. Billy noticed this also. I would reiterate what Billy has said, the poem is in your reply.
"I inadvertently rejected a cute blond trying to casually chat me up, who was working for live nation...she was on MDMA and maybe coke, and I destroyed her by not being able to form any answers"
Even in this there is a poem ready to be teased out...
Keep writing
Mark
However, you do have an interesting way with words and your explanation of how the poem was written is in itself more of a poem. Billy noticed this also. I would reiterate what Billy has said, the poem is in your reply.
"I inadvertently rejected a cute blond trying to casually chat me up, who was working for live nation...she was on MDMA and maybe coke, and I destroyed her by not being able to form any answers"
Even in this there is a poem ready to be teased out...
Keep writing
Mark
wae aye man ye radgie