Mechanized Man (Edit #1)

Mechanized Man (Edit #1)

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07-15-2014, 10:05 AM

besides, do "we" actually pity the scheming itself, or the man? "for fortune that.." is a bit unnatural too: not the sonics, but the phrase. Maybe beg of fortune? hmm... I see you already had that once. Neither are ordeal but I think of may be better.

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Mechanized Man (Edit #1) - by gernseeker - 07-14-2014, 01:20 PM

RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1) - by Leanne - 07-14-2014, 03:53 PM

RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1) - by gernseeker - 07-14-2014, 09:19 PM

RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1 and #2) - by gernseeker - 07-14-2014, 09:52 PM

RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1) - by bena - 07-14-2014, 09:26 PM

RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1) - by trueenigma - 07-14-2014, 11:54 PM

RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1) - by Leanne - 07-15-2014, 05:13 AM

RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1) - by trueenigma - 07-15-2014, 10:05 AM

RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1) - by gernseeker - 07-15-2014, 02:49 PM

RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1) - by tectak - 07-15-2014, 05:26 PM