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Mechanized Man (Edit #1)
Mechanized Man (Edit #1)
bena
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07-14-2014, 09:26 PM
I like the alliteration and assonance of lead legs.
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Mechanized Man (Edit #1)
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gernseeker
- 07-14-2014, 01:20 PM
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Leanne
- 07-14-2014, 03:53 PM
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gernseeker
- 07-14-2014, 09:19 PM
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gernseeker
- 07-14-2014, 09:52 PM
RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1)
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bena
- 07-14-2014, 09:26 PM
RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1)
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- 07-14-2014, 11:54 PM
RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1)
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Leanne
- 07-15-2014, 05:13 AM
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- 07-15-2014, 10:05 AM
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- 07-15-2014, 02:49 PM
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- 07-15-2014, 05:26 PM
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- 07-15-2014, 09:15 PM
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- 07-16-2014, 07:03 AM
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- 07-16-2014, 07:21 AM
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- 07-15-2014, 03:20 PM
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- 07-15-2014, 09:18 PM
RE: Mechanized Man (Edit #1)
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- 07-15-2014, 11:34 PM
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