Stones
#3
I was unaware that stones shine. This poem made me giggle.



I think you should keep it as is, but add a stanza

And baby,
We ain't nothin
but two stones.



Thats what i got from it.
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Messages In This Thread
Stones - by Tiger the Lion - 07-14-2014, 10:53 AM
RE: Stones - by Leanne - 07-14-2014, 11:22 AM
RE: Stones - by QDeathstar - 07-14-2014, 12:40 PM
RE: Stones - by just mercedes - 07-14-2014, 03:09 PM
RE: Stones - by Tiger the Lion - 07-15-2014, 09:37 AM
RE: Stones - by QDeathstar - 07-15-2014, 11:31 AM
RE: Stones - by poe - 07-23-2014, 08:05 PM
RE: Stones - by Tiger the Lion - 07-24-2014, 10:02 AM
RE: Stones - by poe - 07-24-2014, 10:14 PM
RE: Stones - by billy - 07-24-2014, 10:48 PM



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