07-14-2014, 11:22 AM
It was all going really well until the last couple of lines, when I was left thinking "well, how does a stone shine"? My ideas:
He shines
as only a stone in the sky can shine,
in love with the rock
we stand on
or something like that...
I really do like those first two stanzas though -- the cow must seem quite ridiculous to a celestial body
He shines
as only a stone in the sky can shine,
in love with the rock
we stand on
or something like that...
I really do like those first two stanzas though -- the cow must seem quite ridiculous to a celestial body
It could be worse