Plots

[tectak]

Plots

A small patch of grass offers refuge refuge or comfort?
to the worn out soles of feet
that walk on concrete paths period

No one noticed as they passed Disconnected "they" . Who they? The feet or the passers by?End line comma
orderly and manicured to fit end line comma
the plots that line the streetsperiod

Meanwhile, a small patch nearby "Meanwhile" is the wrong word. It is time related. Try incongruously or poignantly or tellingly or ....well, your poem
adorns a plaque that reads; Strictly "...is adorned by a plaque that..." but you may scrape by
"In memory of a life once lived"

Hi,
There is not a lot wrong with this. It reads well and has the advantage of being terse-verse. Some of the word choices are a little versatile (see what I mean?) but it is a very good effort.
Well done.
Best,
tectak