07-13-2014, 06:00 PM
Hi, Atehequa, this struck me as prose with line breaks, it did not strike me as a prose poem either, why? because the content did not lead me "feel" that it was through poetic content, I could not discern any craft in the delivery.
The whole theme struck me as cliche, and the wording/phrases you used reinforced this. You
can use the theme but need to bring a fresh way of looking at it to the reader. This will come with practice and the reading of as much poetry as possible.
Hope this helps in some way. JG
The whole theme struck me as cliche, and the wording/phrases you used reinforced this. You
can use the theme but need to bring a fresh way of looking at it to the reader. This will come with practice and the reading of as much poetry as possible.
Hope this helps in some way. JG