Plots
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Plots (first edit)

A small patch of grass offers refuge
to the worn out soles of feet
that walk on concrete paths.

No one noticed as they passed,
orderly and manicured, to fit in
the plots within suburban streets.

Meanwhile, a small patch nearby
adorns a plaque that reads,
"In memory of a life once lived"


Plots - (original)

A small patch of grass offers refuge
to the worn out soles of feet
that walk on concrete paths

No one noticed as they passed
orderly and manicured to fit
the plots that line the streets

Meanwhile, a small patch nearby
adorns a plaque that reads;
"In memory of a life once lived"
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Messages In This Thread
Plots - by escher - 07-13-2014, 12:15 AM
RE: Plots - by tectak - 07-13-2014, 07:44 PM
RE: Plots - by escher - 07-17-2014, 11:41 PM
RE: Plots - by tectak - 07-18-2014, 12:43 AM
RE: Plots - by ajcohen613 - 07-18-2014, 03:29 AM
RE: Plots - by tectak - 07-18-2014, 07:16 PM
RE: Plots - by trueenigma - 07-20-2014, 02:03 AM
RE: Plots - by abu nuwas - 07-20-2014, 04:48 AM
RE: Plots - by tectak - 07-20-2014, 05:06 AM
RE: Plots - by KatBrown - 07-20-2014, 06:17 AM
RE: Plots - by escher - 07-23-2014, 07:47 PM
RE: Plots - by billy - 07-23-2014, 08:02 PM
RE: Plots - by escher - 07-23-2014, 08:29 PM
RE: Plots - by escher - 07-26-2014, 02:18 AM
RE: Plots - by billy - 07-26-2014, 03:11 AM



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