Why?
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(07-12-2014, 06:43 AM)Keith Wrote:  When the moment comes,
will you pray?
I know you'll say no,
you're like me,
but if you truly knew that today was the day,
in a quiet moment would you pray?
what would we say?
I like the final line, the way it dissolves the boundaries between you and I - as I suppose death will do. Nicely put.
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Why? - by Keith - 07-12-2014, 06:43 AM
RE: Why? - by just mercedes - 07-12-2014, 07:10 AM
RE: Why? - by Keith - 07-12-2014, 09:25 PM
RE: Why? - by Erthona - 07-12-2014, 07:21 AM
RE: Why? - by ajcohen613 - 07-12-2014, 07:30 AM



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