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Good Morning (edit 1)

Good Morning (edit 1)
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07-11-2014, 11:57 PM
@Ella and Dale

Posted an edit with slightly different formatting, to clarify that "pollocks" was intended as a verb. What do you think? Smile
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Good Morning (edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 07-08-2014, 05:20 PM
RE: Good morning (cinquian) - by ellajam - 07-08-2014, 11:06 PM
RE: Good Morning (edit) - by jdvanwijk - 07-08-2014, 11:15 PM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by ellajam - 07-08-2014, 11:28 PM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by Erthona - 07-08-2014, 11:57 PM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by jdvanwijk - 07-09-2014, 12:01 AM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by ellajam - 07-09-2014, 12:25 AM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by jdvanwijk - 07-09-2014, 02:03 AM
RE: Good Morning (edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 07-11-2014, 11:57 PM



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