07-09-2014, 11:56 AM
The second half is written in trochaic tetrameter with 3 rhyming lines per stanza per stanza. The first part is composed of four line with trochaic tetrameter, but an abba rhyme scheme, very unlike the Bard.
The problem is the turtle in this poem is the turtledove, not the turtle who lives inside his shell. However congratulation for finding one of the most obscure poems by Shakespeare. It obviously has more layers than merely the superficial. The form doesn't seem Shakespearean, but the theme(s) seem in line with his other writings.
Tired, brain shutting down, must go connect myself to energy portal.
dale, the hard shelled
The problem is the turtle in this poem is the turtledove, not the turtle who lives inside his shell. However congratulation for finding one of the most obscure poems by Shakespeare. It obviously has more layers than merely the superficial. The form doesn't seem Shakespearean, but the theme(s) seem in line with his other writings.
Tired, brain shutting down, must go connect myself to energy portal.
dale, the hard shelled
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.