07-09-2014, 02:03 AM
(07-09-2014, 12:25 AM)ellajam Wrote:Hello Ella, thank you for the idea! Though it wasn't intentional, I actually kind of like the dissonance of meaning that "pollocks" without a capital letter causes, but I'll give it some more thought!(07-09-2014, 12:01 AM)jdvanwijk Wrote:Maybe capitalizing Pollock in stead of Earth might help, that's a lovely image I missed. I pictured being beaten with a fish, thinking it probably had a different but similar meaning. But I've got fishing on my mind anyway.(07-08-2014, 11:57 PM)Erthona Wrote: Well that is a vivid image, although I thought "pollack" was a fish. Does it have another meaning? Probably "God" shouldn't be capitalized.Thanks for your feedback, Dale! Here it's intended as a self-invented verb, "to pollock something", i.e. to splatter something like Jackson Pollock did.
Dale


