Good Morning (edit 1)
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(07-08-2014, 11:06 PM)ellajam Wrote:  Big Grin That's a violent wake-up call, like one of those 2 bell alarms. Big Grin

Heron's
wingspan slices
though dissipating mists--
soon sun will preen in lake's fun-house
mirror.
Yeah, it did feel like that this morning... Wink Really like your cinquain - the lake as a fun-house mirror is a great image. It's a fun form to work with, isn't it? Smile
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Good Morning (edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 07-08-2014, 05:20 PM
RE: Good morning (cinquian) - by ellajam - 07-08-2014, 11:06 PM
RE: Good Morning (edit) - by jdvanwijk - 07-08-2014, 11:15 PM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by ellajam - 07-08-2014, 11:28 PM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by Erthona - 07-08-2014, 11:57 PM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by jdvanwijk - 07-09-2014, 12:01 AM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by ellajam - 07-09-2014, 12:25 AM
RE: Good Morning (cinquain) - by jdvanwijk - 07-09-2014, 02:03 AM
RE: Good Morning (edit 1) - by jdvanwijk - 07-11-2014, 11:57 PM



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