07-08-2014, 11:15 PM
(07-08-2014, 11:06 PM)ellajam Wrote:Yeah, it did feel like that this morning...That's a violent wake-up call, like one of those 2 bell alarms.
Heron's
wingspan slices
though dissipating mists--
soon sun will preen in lake's fun-house
mirror.
Really like your cinquain - the lake as a fun-house mirror is a great image. It's a fun form to work with, isn't it?


That's a violent wake-up call, like one of those 2 bell alarms.