07-08-2014, 12:11 PM
This would be a drastic edit based on everyone's comments. A few paths I could go down but this is the one that I'm feeling right now. Thanks Dale, Billy, Tom. Not quite sure if this is the right direction.
Date Night ??
On this last uncontested inch
we play upon, remember this:
Grace ain't forgetting.
If there's football on this Christmas Day,
I couldn't watch if we couldn't play,
but Grace ain't forgetting.
So even if this too should pass-
over the painted jamb on our house of glass,
Grace ain't forgetting.
And the football on that Christmas Day,
was played not quite how children play.
Grace is not forgetting.
Date Night ??
On this last uncontested inch
we play upon, remember this:
Grace ain't forgetting.
If there's football on this Christmas Day,
I couldn't watch if we couldn't play,
but Grace ain't forgetting.
So even if this too should pass-
over the painted jamb on our house of glass,
Grace ain't forgetting.
And the football on that Christmas Day,
was played not quite how children play.
Grace is not forgetting.