He visits gangs in the meadow - Edit 1

[bena]

I just want to say....there are phrases in this that are stunning. They could be a poem of their own right. Together it just seems a bit mish-mash and I wonder what it all means, that's all. If we are observing a scene, give us more detail so we are all with you and not looking at a Picaso painting pointing out -- I think that's the nose....know what I mean?


bena becomes melonius. (my name is mel btw if I type that sometime)