07-07-2014, 11:17 AM
I like the ambiguity. Trouble in paradise. Suburban dystopia is an interesting contrast to typical expectations. I would like a bit more imagery to show how the relationship fell apart, rather than just that it did. Unless it was just boredom?
Broad strokes with a fine tipped brush. Interesting technique. Kinda refreshing in a tell-all post-facebook world. I'm interested in seeing what else you've got.
Broad strokes with a fine tipped brush. Interesting technique. Kinda refreshing in a tell-all post-facebook world. I'm interested in seeing what else you've got.

