A hum in the red sky
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I like the ambiguity. Trouble in paradise. Suburban dystopia is an interesting contrast to typical expectations. I would like a bit more imagery to show how the relationship fell apart, rather than just that it did. Unless it was just boredom?

Broad strokes with a fine tipped brush. Interesting technique. Kinda refreshing in a tell-all post-facebook world. I'm interested in seeing what else you've got.
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A hum in the red sky - by Alexearth - 07-04-2014, 07:08 PM
RE: A hum in the red sky - by John Galt - 07-04-2014, 11:49 PM
RE: A hum in the red sky - by Alexearth - 07-05-2014, 06:29 PM
RE: A hum in the red sky - by LorettaYoung - 07-05-2014, 10:37 PM
RE: A hum in the red sky - by LorettaYoung - 07-05-2014, 02:26 AM
RE: A hum in the red sky - by 71degrees - 07-05-2014, 11:19 PM
RE: A hum in the red sky - by Alexearth - 07-06-2014, 12:34 AM
RE: A hum in the red sky - by 71degrees - 07-07-2014, 11:02 AM
RE: A hum in the red sky - by trueenigma - 07-07-2014, 11:17 AM
RE: A hum in the red sky - by Alexearth - 07-07-2014, 09:48 PM
RE: A hum in the red sky - by nicksherman - 07-10-2014, 11:57 PM
RE: A hum in the red sky - by Alexearth - 07-13-2014, 01:03 AM
RE: A hum in the red sky - by gernseeker - 07-13-2014, 11:47 AM



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