07-07-2014, 12:39 AM
Bena is correct. It is the difference between:
"Highway lights among
shadows
Under charcoal sky
and again the silence
a wing over the suburbs
Faces in abandoned cars
Enter the City
where the curtains close"
If written as sentences with the implied ending and beginning.
"Highway lights among shadows. Under charcoal sky and again the silence a wing over the suburbs. Enter the City where the curtains close."
Dale
"Highway lights among
shadows
Under charcoal sky
and again the silence
a wing over the suburbs
Faces in abandoned cars
Enter the City
where the curtains close"
If written as sentences with the implied ending and beginning.
"Highway lights among shadows. Under charcoal sky and again the silence a wing over the suburbs. Enter the City where the curtains close."
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.