07-06-2014, 03:02 PM
I like this part:
"I lie with the world,
The world lies with me,
I lie to my fellows,
Holding onto these three,
Egotism, arrogance and hypocrisy,
hate those of minds free,
I fold to the blinded
Ignorance is my reality.
My thoughts aare one sided."
I think I would make that the poem.
If I were not doing a crit, you would have lost me at the first line.
Dale
"I lie with the world,
The world lies with me,
I lie to my fellows,
Holding onto these three,
Egotism, arrogance and hypocrisy,
hate those of minds free,
I fold to the blinded
Ignorance is my reality.
My thoughts aare one sided."
I think I would make that the poem.
If I were not doing a crit, you would have lost me at the first line.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.