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Honey Bee Sermon
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07-06-2014, 12:34 PM
Thanks for the replies, and the helpful suggestions. I hadn't thought to use debris, and those bleeding hearts are quite cool (The legend is also interesting). I guess this poem has a little problem with clarity, but what I was trying to go for with the heart glued swords thing was that bees have stingers attached to their hearts.
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Honey Bee Sermon - by Brownlie - 07-05-2014, 05:46 AM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by Erthona - 07-05-2014, 06:48 AM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by LorettaYoung - 07-05-2014, 07:17 AM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by just mercedes - 07-05-2014, 08:44 AM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by Brownlie - 07-05-2014, 10:33 AM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by abu nuwas - 07-05-2014, 07:46 PM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by ellajam - 07-05-2014, 09:06 PM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by Brownlie - 07-06-2014, 12:34 PM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by ellajam - 07-06-2014, 09:43 PM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by vagabond - 07-06-2014, 09:23 PM
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