07-06-2014, 01:03 AM
(07-05-2014, 09:39 PM)WordJunky Wrote: Thank you both, my first reaction is to tell the both of you to F off and who the F are you to tell me whats(what's) wrong or right in my writing....
but...
im(I'm) the one for (who) asked for criticism and appreciate your feedback, i (I)am novice in the area of grammer (pun intended(...hmmm)) and punctuation and your (you're) a huge help!!!! thanks!!!(Thanks!!! You're welcome)
You do not need to ask for crit on this site. The site is quintessentially a forum dedicated to the improvement poetry by receiving AND GIVING critique to other posters. Unless you are a phenomena in that you write but cannot read, could you please take some time to read the site rules. Unless you GIVE valid and useful critique you will find that your poems will not be available for comment . This is a tiny warning.
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