The Wrong But Theoretical Answer

[Keith]

Thank you both, my first reaction is to tell the both of you to F off and who the F are you to tell me whats wrong or right in my writing....

but...

im the one for asked for criticism and appreciate your feedback, i am novice in the area of grammer (pun intended) and punctuation and your a huge help!!!! thanks!!!

Hi, you seemed to have missed the point here, Elle has asked you to join in with the site by posting some feedback for others but I have noticed you have posted another poem. Feedback between members is what makes the site work so my advice would be to put your first reaction firmly behind you and start reading and commenting on others poetry. Best Keith