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Oh, the Irony
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07-05-2014, 10:58 PM
BJ: I understand your point, myself having heard to be too abstract. I read your other poems and enjoyed them. This poem is just too abstract to be understandable to most people. You have relevant issues that should be known, and shared; but I think you could do it in a better way and not loose the imagination. Best Loretta
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Oh, the Irony - by BJ_Murphy - 07-03-2014, 09:12 AM
RE: Oh, the Irony - by rowens - 07-04-2014, 03:47 AM
RE: Oh, the Irony - by Wjames - 07-04-2014, 06:59 AM
RE: Oh, the Irony - by Erthona - 07-05-2014, 02:12 AM
RE: Oh, the Irony - by LorettaYoung - 07-05-2014, 02:16 AM
RE: Oh, the Irony - by BJ_Murphy - 07-05-2014, 09:50 AM
RE: Oh, the Irony - by milo - 07-05-2014, 10:22 AM
RE: Oh, the Irony - by billy - 07-16-2014, 12:32 PM
RE: Oh, the Irony - by LorettaYoung - 07-05-2014, 10:58 PM
RE: Oh, the Irony - by Erthona - 07-06-2014, 08:12 AM
RE: Oh, the Irony - by nicksherman - 07-11-2014, 12:27 AM
RE: Oh, the Irony - by gernseeker - 07-13-2014, 12:06 PM
RE: Oh, the Irony - by KROD - 07-16-2014, 07:33 AM
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