07-05-2014, 09:16 PM
Welcome back. Please take the time to read some of the other work posted and give to others the same advice you seek. Thanks, ella/mod
(07-05-2014, 01:47 PM)WordJunky Wrote: I have only posted one other poem in past months. I received good advice and it was much appreciated, perhaps I could receive some more of that advice but this time pertaining to this here shorter poem. Thanks in advance.
The Wrong But,
Theoretical Answer
A precise omission,
That of the most honest division,
Another multiplication,
Minus some untruthful additions,
The perfect equation,
Which having solved the most decimal of decisions,
Patterns in geometric,
Numbers
Problems
Unsolved mathematical collisions,
Simply philosophic questions,
That of in vision,
Perhaps
Regular ole’ everyday
Mysticism & superstition
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