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Honey Bee Sermon
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07-05-2014, 06:48 AM
A villanelle... Is S3L1 not suppose to rhyme? "Dreams" seems to break the pattern. A clever use of your two lines. The enjambment works well. Not too bad for a villanelle.
 Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
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Honey Bee Sermon - by Brownlie - 07-05-2014, 05:46 AM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by Erthona - 07-05-2014, 06:48 AM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by LorettaYoung - 07-05-2014, 07:17 AM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by just mercedes - 07-05-2014, 08:44 AM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by Brownlie - 07-05-2014, 10:33 AM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by abu nuwas - 07-05-2014, 07:46 PM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by ellajam - 07-05-2014, 09:06 PM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by Brownlie - 07-06-2014, 12:34 PM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by ellajam - 07-06-2014, 09:43 PM
RE: Honey Bee Sermon - by vagabond - 07-06-2014, 09:23 PM
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