Ding Dong
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There's something odd about the start of your second line with "Then the"

Look at me go man. Eventually I'll keep hacking away at poems until there's nothing left.
I'll be there in a minute.
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Ding Dong - by Erthona - 07-04-2014, 08:18 AM
RE: Ding Dong - by newsclippings - 07-04-2014, 12:56 PM
RE: Ding Dong - by Erthona - 07-04-2014, 01:13 PM
RE: Ding Dong - by ellajam - 07-04-2014, 08:43 PM
RE: Ding Dong - by Erthona - 07-05-2014, 01:41 AM
RE: Ding Dong - by Tiger the Lion - 07-05-2014, 11:26 AM



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