Murder

[ChristopherSea]

Hi chris.
Just one thing real quick to think about until come back.
I like that you chose to go with a simpler, more accessible, American Fiction sentence structure in S2, but now the "it" that keeps popping up is a bit of a bother. I'm sure you can find a workaround so that you can keep the cleaner, sleeker sentences without needing them both.

Yes I see, now that you mention it truE. Those two 'It's do stand out like sore thumbs. I used them to address Tom's problem with the run on sentence. However, I can readily remove one of them with the restoration of a comma. Thanks so much./Chris