Hunger Games

[Keith]

Thinking back through your poetic endeavors that I've read, it seems to me that you're developing some real poetic control (of course there's always backing and filling). I mean that not in the sense of one who knows much about poetry and its devices, but rather just as a reader who finds it easier and easier to get drawn into your poems and carried through to the end.

Or something like that.

Hi NN
You are very kind, its always good to get feedback, the technical side of poetry has me lost in its forest so its great that the site has members with an all seeing eye that can offer us breadcrumbs home, thank you. Best Keith