07-03-2014, 07:03 AM
Hi chris.
Just one thing real quick to think about until come back.
I like that you chose to go with a simpler, more accessible, American Fiction sentence structure in S2, but now the "it" that keeps popping up is a bit of a bother. I'm sure you can find a workaround so that you can keep the cleaner, sleeker sentences without needing them both.
Just one thing real quick to think about until come back.
I like that you chose to go with a simpler, more accessible, American Fiction sentence structure in S2, but now the "it" that keeps popping up is a bit of a bother. I'm sure you can find a workaround so that you can keep the cleaner, sleeker sentences without needing them both.

