07-03-2014, 02:48 AM
Thinking back through your poetic endeavors that I've read, it seems to me that you're developing some real poetic control (of course there's always backing and filling). I mean that not in the sense of one who knows much about poetry and its devices, but rather just as a reader who finds it easier and easier to get drawn into your poems and carried through to the end.
Or something like that.
Or something like that.
You can't hate me more than I hate myself. I win.
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."