Dawn's Amethyst Sky

[BJ_Murphy]

This was, truly, a wonderful read. The 4th stanza, at first, seemed out of place, but after giving it 2nd and 3rd reads, it felt like a nice transition from setting to character. I agree with Todd, however, about the first line. Though a simple re-wording may do just as fine, if not better. Turning an ongoing flow of 5-line stanzas into a 4 then 5 line stanza would seem odd.

Looking forward to more poems from you!