Guy at the bus stop
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Hysterical (I'm not really hysterical but the comments are kind of funny) All in all you both bring up some very valid points. This poem is quite messy.

quail verb
: to feel afraid and often to show your fear in a way that can be clearly seen

It still doesn't vindicate quail. The guy was talking to himself, he had a bag full of burnt out butts he was trying to smoke, and then he collapsed on the ground. An ambulance came by, and he wouldn't talk to them so they took him away. Anyway, thanks for the comments.
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Guy at the bus stop - by Brownlie - 06-27-2014, 05:13 PM
RE: Guy at the bus stop - by LorettaYoung - 06-30-2014, 05:21 AM
RE: Guy at the bus stop - by Brownlie - 06-30-2014, 06:46 AM
RE: Guy at the bus stop - by Erthona - 07-01-2014, 09:06 AM
RE: Guy at the bus stop - by just mercedes - 07-01-2014, 09:37 AM
RE: Guy at the bus stop - by Brownlie - 07-01-2014, 10:12 AM
RE: Guy at the bus stop - by Alexearth - 07-04-2014, 06:24 PM



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