07-01-2014, 09:17 AM
The meter seems to start out Seuss, but then goes to "night before Christmas". And as Tom noted, if your going to start with an xaya rhyme pattern, then don't change the rest to rhyming couplets.
And the Missus said,
as I went off to work,
better zip up that fly,
and tuck in your shirt!
Dale
And the Missus said,
as I went off to work,
better zip up that fly,
and tuck in your shirt!
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.