06-30-2014, 09:00 AM
(06-28-2014, 03:26 PM)Brownlie Wrote:I quite like your suggestion, but I still dunno about the comma.(06-27-2014, 01:01 PM)newsclippings Wrote: Sometimes I can feel my neck crack back,
repulse cut forward.
This shit isn’t for you,
much as you’d like it.
I could have been unsullied,
you’d still call me whore.
Everyone had their turn with your words.
It makes you the harlot,
and I the dick to shove it in. -- Maybe capitalize Dick so it clearly doubles as a generic male name and their emblematic organ. A comma after I might also help.
I'll be there in a minute.

