The Turtle
#8
Thanks mercedes,

I thought at the time the line "to his protective shell." was too much, but left it for some reason. And yes he is a sexist pig, I however am not...unfortunatelyHysterical

Anyway, all good suggestions, I shall take them under advisement for the edit.

Thanks again,

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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The Turtle - by Erthona - 06-28-2014, 05:16 AM
RE: The Turtle - by billy - 06-28-2014, 07:47 AM
RE: The Turtle - by Tiger the Lion - 06-28-2014, 08:15 AM
RE: The Turtle - by Erthona - 06-28-2014, 09:48 AM
RE: The Turtle - by poe - 06-28-2014, 10:01 AM
RE: The Turtle - by Erthona - 06-28-2014, 10:13 AM
RE: The Turtle - by just mercedes - 06-28-2014, 10:25 AM
RE: The Turtle - by Erthona - 06-30-2014, 03:18 AM
RE: The Turtle - by ellajam - 06-30-2014, 09:34 PM
RE: The Turtle - by tectak - 07-01-2014, 12:30 AM
RE: The Turtle - by Erthona - 07-01-2014, 03:47 AM
RE: The Turtle - by tectak - 07-01-2014, 04:19 AM
RE: The Turtle - by ellajam - 07-01-2014, 04:18 AM
RE: The Turtle - by Erthona - 07-01-2014, 08:28 AM
RE: The Turtle - by tectak - 07-01-2014, 04:07 PM
RE: The Turtle - by Erthona - 07-02-2014, 01:58 AM



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