Cradle Moon

[Jwrite]

I'm not sure if this wanted to be an old English throw back or a country song. If you are going to add on "o" and "neath" to give your poem more of a genre then you need more throughout to make it cohesive or leave them out altogether. I liked it more when I pictured you penciling this down in cowboy boots with your buddy playing banjo alongside. Give your mind a place to hang out like that and I'm sure your third poem will be much more consistent, keep writing.