Of nothing
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(06-27-2014, 01:01 PM)newsclippings Wrote:  Sometimes I can feel my neck crack back,
repulse cut forward.
This shit isn’t for you,
much as you’d like it.

I could have been unsullied,
you’d still call me whore.
Everyone had their turn with your words.

It makes you the harlot,
and I the dick to shove it in. -- Maybe capitalize Dick so it clearly doubles as a generic male name and their emblematic organ. A comma after I might also help.
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Of nothing - by newsclippings - 06-27-2014, 01:01 PM
RE: Of nothing - by Erthona - 06-27-2014, 02:58 PM
RE: Of nothing - by newsclippings - 06-28-2014, 04:16 AM
RE: Of nothing - by ellajam - 06-28-2014, 04:26 AM
RE: Of nothing - by Erthona - 06-28-2014, 03:36 PM
RE: Of nothing - by Erthona - 06-28-2014, 04:24 AM
RE: Of nothing - by Brownlie - 06-28-2014, 03:26 PM
RE: Of nothing - by newsclippings - 06-30-2014, 09:00 AM
RE: Of nothing - by billy - 06-30-2014, 11:54 AM
RE: Of nothing - by newsclippings - 07-04-2014, 12:45 PM



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