The Turtle
#6
Thanks for giving it a read Poe.
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Paul,

Hey, you do what you can, for we are all honorable men, for tomorrow we die...at least a little. Smile

Any comments are appreciated, senseless or knot!

Dale
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Billy,

Yes I agree with all your comments, except for the "it", which I have no idea what you mean. Considering the nature of the poem it would be hubris to ask for explication. I will correct the Hemingway spelling error. Thanks for the catch.

"Sadly there are no birds to fly."

Ugly American

"Hey you Scottish birds up for a little flight?"

"It's Wales you idiot, Wales"

"Oh sorry, are you Scottish whales up for a little flight?!?"

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Messages In This Thread
The Turtle - by Erthona - 06-28-2014, 05:16 AM
RE: The Turtle - by billy - 06-28-2014, 07:47 AM
RE: The Turtle - by Tiger the Lion - 06-28-2014, 08:15 AM
RE: The Turtle - by Erthona - 06-28-2014, 09:48 AM
RE: The Turtle - by poe - 06-28-2014, 10:01 AM
RE: The Turtle - by Erthona - 06-28-2014, 10:13 AM
RE: The Turtle - by just mercedes - 06-28-2014, 10:25 AM
RE: The Turtle - by Erthona - 06-30-2014, 03:18 AM
RE: The Turtle - by ellajam - 06-30-2014, 09:34 PM
RE: The Turtle - by tectak - 07-01-2014, 12:30 AM
RE: The Turtle - by Erthona - 07-01-2014, 03:47 AM
RE: The Turtle - by tectak - 07-01-2014, 04:19 AM
RE: The Turtle - by ellajam - 07-01-2014, 04:18 AM
RE: The Turtle - by Erthona - 07-01-2014, 08:28 AM
RE: The Turtle - by tectak - 07-01-2014, 04:07 PM
RE: The Turtle - by Erthona - 07-02-2014, 01:58 AM



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