06-28-2014, 09:48 AM
Billy, I was going to name it William, but thought that might be too obvious, and of course it works on more than one level. "a suggestion would be to walk instead of walking" Yes, that is stronger. I'm sure about this comment?
"'him' is and needed?" If you mean is "him" needed, I suppose not. I put it there to avoid confusion with the character and "Hemingway" Yes, I see I misspelled "Hemingway",l thanks for the catch. Not sure about the "it". Could you be more specific, I realize that is a bit of hubris considering the nature of the poem, but...
Thanks,
Dale
"'him' is and needed?" If you mean is "him" needed, I suppose not. I put it there to avoid confusion with the character and "Hemingway" Yes, I see I misspelled "Hemingway",l thanks for the catch. Not sure about the "it". Could you be more specific, I realize that is a bit of hubris considering the nature of the poem, but...
Thanks,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.